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Sunday 20 August 2017

SAVE THE CAT!!!!!!!!


‘’Fire fire’’ I heard  as I sprinted into the building. I could see smoke everywhere there was so much ash and dust. I saw a cat lying on the floor it look dead I felt terrified and shocked I was really sad i was thinking ‘’save the cat’’

1 comment:

  1. Wow i like how you made a picture in the readers mind,
    I think you should describe what the cat looks like,
    I like how you put punctuation

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